My Queen

My Queen

A Poem by Shawn Killian
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Written for my LillyRose

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My Queen of Beauty

My Angel of Light

Won't you save me from my dark and lonely nights.

My Queen of Beauty

My Angel of Love

Take me away to the heavens above.

My Queen of Beauty

My Angel so Fine

Won't you be mine

Tonight?

© 2010 Shawn Killian


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this is cute(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


awwwww it's beautiful and flows soo verrrryyy welll
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! :)
-abbie

Posted 14 Years Ago


simple and a lovely flow. Quaint choice of words and just lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, this is adorable. (: I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


simple and smooth to the point of this bliss love... and i like the sexy twist end angel so fine near the end

Posted 14 Years Ago


lilyangelrose loves you , tats WATS up man see i told you not to lose hope.

see ya brother.

Posted 14 Years Ago


it has that melody , this would fit perfect in one of your song writings Richard.
i also how you use queen and angel . awesome dude. i hope you would use this in one of your song writings. and dude i hope ms m gives me a break to draw an animal in one day is crazy 30 minutes lol.



Posted 14 Years Ago


This is simply gorgeous. This can definitely would make any girl feel beautiful and special. I loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even though i'm NO expert its really, really good!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww this is really good. i loved it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Shawn Killian
Shawn Killian

Stroudsburg, PA



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I am a gloomy goth, alone in a world of wannabe's. I write dark depressing stories, listen to dark, depressing music, and am absorbed with Assassins Creed 3 I am eager to talk to fellow musicians.. more..

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