just a dream

just a dream

A Poem by Rendawg
"

silly silly fo philly somone requested me to write a song abot a good dram to turning to a nightmare

"

when i finally close my eyes

the world just seems so clear

climbin candy mountin,

angels whisperin in my ear

 

dancin with some ninjas

and singing to some cheese

soaring in the sky

or flyng with some bees

 

but as i went to blink

it all started tuning grey

creatures rising from the ground

it twas no longer day

 

monsters rising in the night

while a full moon shines so bright

each of worst nightmares

have pushed me away fom the light

 

and when it comes

to frightning for my mind

i awake in great speed

almost just in time

 

© 2011 Rendawg


Author's Note

Rendawg
i didnt know how to end it

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hey! monsters rising in the night
while a full moon shines so bright
each of worst nightmares
have appeared to come alive

that didnt rhyme!! you gotta watch that!!! lol u always leave one paragraph that doesnt rhyme! lol but awesome poem!!! i liked the cheese part haha

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It was only JUST A DREAM!! love that song ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Rendawg

10 Years Ago

Me To!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey! monsters rising in the night
while a full moon shines so bright
each of worst nightmares
have appeared to come alive

that didnt rhyme!! you gotta watch that!!! lol u always leave one paragraph that doesnt rhyme! lol but awesome poem!!! i liked the cheese part haha

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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HEY! my names reno vasquez im 16 years old and ive been writing since i was in 5th grade which was about 10 years old i love to write i write songs poems storys.i probly enjowrittig songs more then an.. more..

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