terrorizing thoughts

terrorizing thoughts rushing to my mind

sleeping in my dreams all the good thoughts left behind

a rush of pity sadness dispare

trying to blink but all the seens are still there

darkness is growing and the nightmares are here

spirits surrounding me with my head filled with fear

heartbeat is racing voices grow loud

children are sobbing getting lost in the crowd

death is approching screams keep on sceeching

blood keeps on splashing and the heart just stops beating

 

terrizing thought rushing to my brain

like it burns in my head slowly drives me insane

looking to run but theres no escape

from the people that are screaming and the bones being scraped

it gets in my head then starts to rot

no way to get rid of all these terrorizing thoughts

 

distracted by darkness cause light disapears

vanishing good memories and crushing them with fear

torches lit up and fields set ablaze

houses shall fall acid is rain

 

terrorizing thoughts rushing to my brain

like it burns in my head slowly drives me insane

looking to run but theres no escape

from the people that are screaming

and the bones being scraped

gets in my head then starts to rot

no way to get rid of all these terrorizing thoughts

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

holy sh** that is epic. i love how you repeated it again....in the last paragraph....wow amazing..BUT you need to go over ur poems and fix the little rhyming errors cause it flows perfectly but then there are like 2 lines in this poem that dont rhyme when everything else does. ur so talented!!! and i know ur only gonna get better :) ur making poems just like mine and ur only 16. and im 23. ur awesome dude.