Caramelized Love

          

Along the twist of caramel love

 

The claws of heart scratches every part

When delights are preserved in nights

Of moonlit ~

       Soft shivers accompanies

Curtains meant to fall

Hiding the wild fusions

 Witnessed by evil moans

Sweetened were  your bites

     All over my land

Known as skin

Just deepen with love

 

Swallowed lip - one that can’t lie

Enjoyed pleasurable kisses ~ so fine

 

You breathed me

And I breathed you

Our allure survived

In that whole magical night

They call it Valentine’s

But it's  mine

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 ReD (06/02/15)

 

           

Reviews

[Aerra]

This is interesting... I'd love to know where this originated from in terms of why that last stanza was written the way it was. Captivating.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thanks for the read dear and well It has no story actually.. i wrote it for Valentine special last year

[Brian]

It has a very textural basis to it.. a landscape of love. The canvas of the body. The emotions of the heart.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I appreciate.Thank you so much !

[Tania]

An eloquent and beautiful write up ...

[Elie Marie]

I love this. I love your descriptions!! Well done!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much dear !

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Ah! to breathe love and understand thy
Language of thy heart of Love and it be your
every breath is such a beautiful thing indeed.


I loved these stanza's lines.



You breathed me

And I breathed you

Our allure survived

In that whole magical night

They call it Valentine’s

But it's mine




Thank your for sharing and stopping
by my page.



God bless. Benita

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank you so much !! God bless you too : )

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome.

[Warren Daniel II]

The title alone was just too good I had to give this a read. I enjoyed these lines " You breathed me
And I breathed you
Our allure survived
In that whole magical night
They call it Valentine’s
But it's mine" this was the perfect resolution which the poem needed.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank you so much.I appreciate n glad u liked it .

[Arsh]

Caramel Love? Sounds nice.
But.. wha... what? Valentine? Hell .. what a garbage! Ah - But not exactly!

Anyway -
--- Yeah, kinda deep write. I`m sure, lovers would appreciate it with heart, no matter what. Valentine makes lovers full of smiles so, they`d really like this piece of yous. You write it with your beautiful heart. Keep it up!!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

U don't need to review if u dont lyk it lol ;')
i lyk to write all kind of poem according to season ;)

[Arsh]

Sorry, but I "NEEDED" to write a review so I did. Any Problem? lol

[Lenah Mehzabin]

u r really interesting devil one ;]D

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poem for the days of love.
"You breathed me
And I breathed you
Our allure survived
In that whole magical night
They call it Valentine’s
But it's mine"
The above lines are a perfect Valentine wish and words for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! I'm really glad that you liked it :))

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Cool Girl]

Haha, I loved this!!! :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

: ) Thank you dear !

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome, girlfriend! XD

[Tasfia Islam]

its actually a hilarious poem. I loved it ;)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

;)) Thank you ( I knew you will :D )