EverGreen

 

If I could swim alone 

In the garden of evergreen

I would have seat and think

My words with no noise

But a halcyon choice

In sound mild

With sweet dim

Just breath unsmoked rhythms

Embracing  heart

The only thing

I gladly love

And always will

Even in dim

No company indeed

The place I dream

Would be best to live

Scars becoming a history

So less for memory to consist

In a blink of eye

I can see

Me being a queen

Of time

Immortal

Covered with harmony

Sweet ..

 

Reviews

[armin]

Nice imagery, lenah you are quite talented.
Beautiful one.

armin. ..

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much armin for such an honor !

[closed]

Nice.

I like the epic touch at the end


-Dream

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much : )

[Lizardo]

This is such a beautiful poem with great imagery around it
I did enjoy this awesome write
Great work!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh Thank you so much .I'm glad you liked it! : )

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

we all need a place where we feel good, where we can hide for everything...a place called evergreen. well done :) Rudi

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! I'm glad you liked it : )

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

very eloquent:) A wonderful write:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! : )

[Cool Girl]

This is absolutely beautiful!! You are such a talented writer:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Aww ! haha Thank you so much for such an honor : )

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:) you act like I'm a celebrity, truly I'm not xD

[Lenah Mehzabin]

certainly u r ( in future? ;)

[Cool Girl]

XD thanks:)

[prince digbani]

a beautiful work. sometimes i seat alone in quietness wishing if it could be possible for me to be alone without friends or family trying trying to know the reason for my silence.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ya very true! . Thank you so much : )

[prince digbani]

you're welcome

[Confuser]

Oh my goodness! How unbelievably beautiful. Wow ReD, you can write!!! I love it, just love it. I sigh, oh my. Just Wonderful.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Aww!! haha Thank you so much ! I'm really happy that u liked it : ))

[Confuser]

When I heard Ed Sheeran singing; and the word Evergreen come out of his mouth; wow I love it, but I love it more in your words. What beautiful writing....so talented.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

haha you really awesome!

[Confuser]

Great writing. Thank you.