EverGreen

 

If I could swim alone 

In the garden of evergreen

I would have seat and think

My words with no noise

But a halcyon choice

In sound mild

With sweet dim

Just breath unsmoked rhythms

Embracing  heart

The only thing

I gladly love

And always will

Even in dim

No company indeed

The place I dream

Would be best to live

Scars becoming a history

So less for memory to consist

In a blink of eye

I can see

Me being a queen

Of time

Immortal

Covered with harmony

Sweet ..

 

Reviews

[Rassoul]

Such an amazing poem, you play with words really good, keep up the hard work

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Sweet and a Evergreen read. You really play with words beautifully. keep writing :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thanks a lot dear !

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome from Sky!

[Valentine]

A sweet love poem. Valentine

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you ! : )

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best. In my library...:).................

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it : )

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......

[ANTO]

This sounds like Eden ReD. The final lines are so ethereal they almost wisp away on the screen. Class!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! So glad :)

[Saddam]

I gladly love
And always will
Even in dim
No company indeed.

Evergreen, I must say. Too beautiful.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! I'm glad : ) )

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and place described.
"If I could swim alone
In the garden of evergreen
I would have seat and think"
I love the forest. Best place to think and ponder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much Coyote. I'm so glad u liked it : )

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[willweb]

You words always make me think...and that is a good thing. This was yet another beautiful poem from you.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much!.It's a lot coming from you. i'm glad : )

[The StoryTeller]

Wow, I don't even know.... Some of those words I don't know (that's surprising XD) but overall, ReD, that sounded like ancient poetry, especially with how it continued and yet still rhymed, almost subtly. I really like it, and I'd swim there too, or at least just sit in a garden of evergreen. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

haha Thank You! well You made me happy by saying it looks like ancient poetry. They are usually very classy and Ow I'm glad ,I can write in that style !! :))

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, well, I didn't say GOOD ancient poetry.... Jk, it wa good, and was classy. :)

[Matching Socks]

This is excellent, the last few lines created such an impact, well done Red.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad u liked it : )