The False and Beauty

I’ve been glaring at it

For so long

Long enough when I saw them leave

They disappeared..

Yes, Dews

Proudly acted like diamonds - false

It reminds me of something …love?

No, maybe it’s passion

But live cuddling the soma of it (love)

It reminds me of something … promise?

Yes,

But only when they are broken

Intentionally?

Maybe .. No?

It’ just a strange nature

Nature just like .. how the dew are gone

We call it nature’s beauty

right?

Then what’s that?

Love’s beauty?

…… then I should follow it too

Just like every one else

This time I will be dew

 

 

 

Reviews

[Elie Marie]

yes, love. be love.
I love this.
I got stuck in essay season and was sad to miss all your pretty words.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much for such an honor .I am sorry that I'm late ,pardon me dear .I missed you too :)

[Chris]

an interesting conclusion...to take, let alone make. But could you really ever be ...the dew?

[Lenah Mehzabin]

No but again yes ... maybe in a human way but i really wish if i was a dew instead of human
Thank you so much for your review ! : )

[Chris]

It's hard being yourself when you sooo want to be ...yourself.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Certainly you are really right ..

[Saddam]

Yes, Dews
Proudly acted like diamonds - false
It reminds me of something …love?
No, maybe it’s passion.

Vivid image and clear write. Great one. Love it.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much ! .. I'm glad :)

[Lizardo]

This is deep poetry
I enjoy the whole poem but my fav part was this one
''Then what’s that?
Love’s beauty?''
Makes me wonder what really is the beauty of love...
Enjoyable and excellent poem

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! : )

[Confuser]

What great writing - very alluring, clever and beautiful. Wow. Thank you again. Dale

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much Dale ! :) .. so glad

[Confuser]

Y/W, great poem!

[Arsh]

Of course, you're a beauty on dew. Well, sounds good by me.. doesn't it? Of course, it does. Nice poetry/well pen'd words/flow's amazing. Loved the imagery that's expressing the wonder of beauty coming down to every-heart in disguise of pleasurable love. Yes, everybody should fall in love, cause everybody's made up of love. But when it comes to pain, then don't forget, just like everybody falls into love, everybody gets poured themselves into the shower of pain as well. Very nice theme. Read something sexy in a day.

... would be checking out your more poems this day!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I can't hekp but appreciate the way u appreciated ..Thank you :))

[Arsh]

Happy to seduce you. Sounds beneficial by me.. doesn't it? Of course, it does.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Glad to have u my friend ! : D

[Arsh]

Stupid - Girl! Hhaha!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

hehehe very funny cute one ; )
u not gonna get relief of that :p ;)

[Arsh]

Lol - neither I want to get that not at all. Your love's enough to keep me always around ecstasy. Correct me if i'm wrong.