My Hall Of Fame

Standing in the hall of fame

The world is gonna know my name

Earth that is said round

I’ll make it cube

Oh I’ll just make it cube

 

So when I will leave

I don’t wanna see you repeat

When my name will be screamed louder

Buzz your ear, as the echo will be reflected on the square

 

Oh, I’ll be standing in the hall of fame

When I’ll be a star

My light will burn the sins

I don’t need your face

Oops I want to forget even your name

 

I’ll be living for my people

My pride that’s fleeting high

Delivering Peace - harmony sweet

My only wish

My only dream

Standing in the Hall of fame

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[armin]

great dream ,behind every achievement there is a desire and if the dream is committed enough one will definitely be holding it fulfilled.
When I’ll be a star
My light will burn the sins
Doing that you'll be doing a great job and ya try burn all the sins around the world, ha. ...

armin. ...

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank You soo much armin ! : ) .. I'm glad

[Jamestown]

This is really cool, and I pray it becomes a reality for you.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank you so much! i hope so : )

[closed]

I was curious as to when I might happen upon another literary rock star
I'll keep my eye on your celebrity^


-a friend named ''Dream''

[Lenah Mehzabin]

oh haha Thank you dream : )

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I hope your dream will come true, ReD. Very well done. :) Rudi

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much Rudi :) I'm glad !!

[Arsh]

"Oh, I’ll be standing in the hall of fame
When I’ll be a star
My light will burn the sins... "

Very strong lines. Kinda heartfelt/emotional write. You write with your love, but with some heartaches as well. Liked the taste of such things. The title's one of my favorites. So, I admit, you are yourself a sexy hall of fame.. aren't you? Of course, you are.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much !..u got me ryt love but i think i wrote one for u too check that ? :)

[Arsh]

Of course, I did.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

good ! ; ) : )

[anne]

I’ll be living for my people
My pride that’s fleeting high
Delivering Peace - harmony sweet
My only wish
My only dream
Standing in the Hall of fame...........
I liked reading this one, filled with vitality and desire of heart...:))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! anne I'm glad : ))

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the energy and the drive of the poem. I like the honest tone and goals.
"I’ll be living for my people
My pride that’s fleeting high
Delivering Peace - harmony sweet
My only wish
My only dream"
The above lines are amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Standing in the Hall of fame

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh it's an honour .Thank you so much coyote ! : )

[Coyote Poetry]

It is my honor. I enjoy your words.