A Round of Applause

Don’t know if my love was so weak

That left me freeze, sure a broken piece

True, my presence was so little for you to notice

But still..

My soul shouldn’t have remained unread

Selflessly when I loved, entirely

 

A critic now I give

With amusement I read

My own story.

Poetries.. Dark and ash

Shoulders me

Feel so light to see

It’s not only me..

 

Wrong if you think

My tears are streaming

Like they were suppose to be

Here I’m, just a little shocked

How in the same ‘’trap’’

I let my sweet soul

Chewed by a beast

 

Applaud burst out

From throat to my lip

Standing in front of window sill

When I watched you running away.

Because,

You are the loser, as I’m not in your sleeve

Thanks! You finally fixed

In your suited place of “devil”

 

And

“I’’ sigh in relief

I’m not tagged anymore

With so cheap, dirty things

Sorry, but my heart is ever green

It will be waiting for an honest prince.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Arsh]

Quiet heartfelt - write/seemed you`ve got betrayed by the shades of love/your heart cried out in pain, but one heard to you. Nobody heard you cause, you never wanted to hear anybody what you sighed. You got trapped around the infatuation and it cost you very much even your heart with pain and put you all around deep scars - kinda wounds which made you writing this deep heartfelt piece!

Hope all is good out there!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

ya all is good .. : )

[Arsh]

So, you meant, I can take your advantage now?

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Hey no jokes here arsh
This one is my sensitive piece

[Arsh]

So, this`s why had ignored when i`d left review here before. Anyway, Apologize!!

[Arsh]

So, this`s why you had ignored when i`d left review here before. Anyway, Apologize!!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

hey no it's ok ! i didn't ignored i think i mistakenly skiped
"I'' apologize love : )

[Lupus Kaos]

Thank you, it was a delight reading this. A delight because it makes the reader hope.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

thank you so much ! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Lesson learn can make us wiser. Love will test us often. I like the story leading to the good ending. Better to leave bad people and memories behind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I appreciate ! thank you so much for your kind view :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[anne]

“I’’ sigh in relief
I’m not tagged anymore
With so cheap, dirty things
Sorry, but my heart is ever green
It will be waiting for an honest prince.
.......this is really a beautiful work...I liked all the creativity and ideas summarized...it touch one in many ways...:))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much! i m glad that u liked it : )

[anne]

you are welcome...:))

[Afraa]

This poem touched me in so many ways. Indeed it is very mesmerizing, Lenah. That mind of yours can really put words together in such a beautiful way.

This poem deserves a round of applause!!! See what I did there? :D

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ohww than so much ! i really loved ur kind words ! You made me happy n glad :-)

[Afraa]

You're very welcome! :)

[Rea Sky]

these following phrases are my favorite!
"I let my sweet soul
Chewed by a beast"
and
"Sorry, but my heart is ever green
It will be waiting for an honest prince."

I liked it! I like the way how the speaker turns something that was suppose to be her lost but turned out to be freedom with humor! Splendidly done!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you soo much ! n u really got the end point ..there is nothing to cry on sm1 who was nothing but fake also an ultimate loser and thats what made me right it with raw humour! :-)