The last Word

Never did I ever claimed

I let you go there, in the most far place

Every word you said

Silently I drunk ..all of them

But just like everyone else

You wanted me to be the full time princess 

Of a fairytale

Indeed

When you knew I was nothing but a dark angel

Complain?

No, I won’t

Because “I” misread your heart

You desired for a diamond jar

And I kept thinking you accepted me

The twilight girl, behind the golds

I was covered with..

Sick me!

Sorry, that I forgot reality sucks

Sorry, I let my hard shell fall

Let you in

 

You saw everything

How I selflessly loved you

Endless battle I kept fighting

Still,

It wasn’t enough

It wasn’t enough to satisfy your selfish thirst

I never mind

But in the last phase 

where you were suppose to be there for me

You simply weren’t

Than who were you?

What you really did?

Nothing,

Ever..

There is a thin difference between what we want and what we need

You are running for the “ Want” now

But the Final words I will ever say

“to you”

 

Never come back

Because I know you will

Just to take the “Need” you left..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

well while reading it ,read it slowly with punctuations I used to enjoy it deeply :) hope u will like it ..

Reviews

[Arsh]

Poor-Desperation never let the heart live peacefully nor even allow the spirit to be around ecstasy.

Very strong words you use to touch the heart. Nice flow of ink that I drink/the emotions/value of faith/heartaches/broken-heart/wounded-soul/tears rolled down your face.. everything is well occupied at the right place.. at the right time... isn't it? Of course, it is.

... heading on to check out your poetry-leaf.. in a day!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank u so much again Arsh ! i can't help but adore your kind words ..glad to know u r going through my poetry pages .It's an honour

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Oh thank u so much again Arsh ! i can't help but adore your kind words ..glad to know u r going through my poetry pages .It's an honour

[Elie Marie]

That thin line between love and hate. That thin line between anger and hurt... or both. And confusion. I know it all too well. This is such a great poem. Such a great way to explain how selfish people can be without sometimes even realizing when it comes to love. Love can be the best thing in the world, and the most devastating. But this, this is a wonderful poem. Props to you for knowing your heart and what's best.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

You really felt the poem Elie ! Glad that it touched u : )

[Lupus Kaos]

Ok, now....this poem....
Especially: Sick me!
Sorry, that I forgot reality sucks
Sorry, I let my hard shell fall
Let you in
Oh my god, sometimes the people we love can become so cruel...Thank you, thank you for expressing some feelings in such a wonderfully depressed/beautifully angry way.Thank you.

[Aleksa]

it's like I actually know exactly how you feel after reading it. keep it going. emotions are too hard to describe but if feels so much better after you do, doesn't it? :) good job! xx

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! you really felt it ! :)

[MandaBear]

Wow what a great poem. Everything so deep and lovely. Great stuff you have here

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! I glad u liked it : )

[Salem]

I liked this poem, well done

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you !

[Salem]

you are welcome :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

Well where to begin with this well written piece? What about my favorite lines? Too many to choose from...

There is thin difference between what we want and what we need..or when you knew I was nothing more than a dark angel

Maybe it was perfect ribbon at the end that tied everything neatly..

This was sheer perfection from beginning to end

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank u soo much ! I was a bit confused if all my stanzas are good but I'm glad and happy that u liked it and thought it's perfect!. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the want and the need in the poem.
"Never come back
Because I know you will
Just to take the “Need” you left.."
The above lines were perfect. You gave resistance and need in the same paragraph. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank u so much for the great appreciation !.I honour :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm honour to read your work and you are welcome.

[Fran Marie]

Deep emotions spill forth in this piece..want and need indeed two separate things, yet so close to differentiate..by the time we figure it out It's too late..great write..

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! u really understood the summery . :)

[Confuser]

Love it throughout and the ending has a great punch; flows lovely throughout and forget about the wonderful metaphors; you are a talent to be reckoned with young lady. Beautiful. Bravo, great writing and don't think I have to say, keep writing. I looked for alive; only through page 2. White Wolf, is the only other close to love poem I have. I hope you read it; I'll definitely keep reading yours. Great talent. Loved it again. Thank you.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

''Punch '' ya haha ;) perfect word ! . u r really a cool person and i really love and respect ur reviews ...Thank u so much for such a great appreciation . I'm happy that my poems reached ur heart :))

[Confuser]

Thank you. Punch, Punch, Punch, sounds funny altogether! HeHeHe!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

haha Punch punch punch! really u made me laugh ,thanks again!! :)

[Confuser]

It's good I still act like a teenager: my son just turned 14. You write so well.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

ya u r really very friendly and still so young ..u r not far from our generation mam :-D

[Confuser]

You are silly, my daughters are much older than you! I can relate to a lot, love music. You would probably be surprised. Anyway, Guten Tag.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ohw that's really a pleasure to know. Nice to meet u Guten :) .I respect you a lot and thanks for being an awesome poet ! :-))

[Confuser]

I am but a notice, but the more I read, .....thanks.