Winter Delight

Sweet little fun in winter so that we can live a little :)

Red cardigan

Designed in my body

“Born Umbra” tall boot

Rose-tone stainless watch

And a heart full try

To live in this seasonal swap

 

Astonished!

How I can’t help but adore myself

Thanx to winter, as it came..

Giving my hair a chestnut brown shade

Yes, It’s perfectly suited

Decorating my pale face

 

 

Touching all those dancing snowflakes

As I entered Cherry’s Coffee Corner

Obviously I never forgot to Dial

All those lunatic’s number

 

Finally my heart mates came

Kisses and hugs are all for them

Sharing hot chocolates

And cups of creamy Mocacino

With all my delight I can say

December is rocking like a band itself

 

So let us embrace it as much as we can

Soon it will be gone

Memories must be kept

Or else we can never look back

And smile at our younger self

 

 

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a talented sixteen year old. You write with a experience pen. I enjoyed the poem. You set up perfect place and coffee/hot chocolate is always tasty on a Winter day.
"Finally my heart mates came
Kisses and hugs are all for them
Sharing hot chocolates
And cups of creamy Mocacino
With all my delight I can say"
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

December is rocking like a band itself

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Aw !Thank you so much for your appreciation .I'm very happy and glad that u liked my piece .thnx again :)

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i liked it a lot it was good but i did get lost at one part and it kinda confused me a little but besides that it was really good

[Lenah Mehzabin]

thank u so much nd i pls tell me where is ur confusion i wud lyk 2 knw :)

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

Cute :) Winter is definitely one of my favorite seasons.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

ya same here but until cold eats me up totally .. :D Thanku soo much !!

[anne]

Finally my heart mates came
Kisses and hugs are all for them
SHARING hot chocolates
And cups of creamy Mocacino
With all my delight I can say
December is rocking like a band itself

So let us embrace it as much as we can
Soon it will be gone
Memories must be kept
Or else we can never look back
And smile at our younger self...

December is my favorite...so sweet lines...yes its a delight...:))