When You are Gone

When You are Gone

A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin

 



It’s been years now

When those Chickadees used to sing in that orchard tree

Behind the lavender garden

We lived, and heard it’s sweet melody

But now there is rust in our window grill

Covering our finger prints

The days of our 20’s..

 

Looking at sky..

 Still now my heart skips

Pain that I try to hide… reveals.

 

You are the Golden star now

 Beside all those silvers

Because once I said it was my favorite

& so You made it your place for forever and ever..

 

Today is again 15th August

And I’m not going to put that rose in a stupid ,dark ,isolated place

When people named it Your  grave

 

Because You are here !

Standing with me

And I’m in my red Gavilina Gown,

You wanted me to wear in every anniversary..

 

Because You are here !

In front of our mirror

Trying to help me with my chain

But failing …as You are so busy

……… playing with my neckline

And I can’t keep Your hands off me !

…………………………………………….

 

But Baby ?

They don’t believe  me

So they are calling me mad old lady

They are saying You are  go"go.ne

Gosh! The-these words ! ..Noh

No NOuuh

 

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© 2014 Lenah Mehzabin


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This is very sweet :) According to Epicurus we are made of atoms - matter - that can't be destroyed, therefore we have to go somewhere when we die because we can't not exist. So why is the theory of ghosts so implausible? I loved the lines "Because you are here!/Standing with me..." So simple and so poignant. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

feeling like"" let me fly now"" haha thank you so much !! nd actually it wasn't a ghost she was havi.. read more
A Scribbler Named Bek

9 Years Ago

Wow that's even cooler than having him be a ghost! (And here I thought it couldn't get better)
Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

haha thank you tkank you so much ! u made me happy when i wasn't actually that much confident abou.. read more



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This is very sweet :) According to Epicurus we are made of atoms - matter - that can't be destroyed, therefore we have to go somewhere when we die because we can't not exist. So why is the theory of ghosts so implausible? I loved the lines "Because you are here!/Standing with me..." So simple and so poignant. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

feeling like"" let me fly now"" haha thank you so much !! nd actually it wasn't a ghost she was havi.. read more
A Scribbler Named Bek

9 Years Ago

Wow that's even cooler than having him be a ghost! (And here I thought it couldn't get better)
Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

haha thank you tkank you so much ! u made me happy when i wasn't actually that much confident abou.. read more
I'm speechless......i mean, wow......made me teary eyed, honestly

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

thank uuuu ! i m glad dat u liked it and really happy as i successfully expressed the sad n teary t.. read more

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Added on December 13, 2014
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Lenah Mehzabin
Lenah Mehzabin

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I consider myself an independent thinker and writer. I started writing here in the writer's cafe from the age of fifteen and with all the bittersweet memories, I must say time really flies. I am a gro.. more..

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