When You are Gone

 

It’s been years now

When those Chickadees used to sing in that orchard tree

Behind the lavender garden

We lived, and heard it’s sweet melody

But now there is rust in our window grill

Covering our finger prints

The days of our 20’s..

 

Looking at sky..

 Still now my heart skips

Pain that I try to hide… reveals.

 

You are the Golden star now

 Beside all those silvers

Because once I said it was my favorite

& so You made it your place for forever and ever..

 

Today is again 15th August

And I’m not going to put that rose in a stupid ,dark ,isolated place

When people named it Your  grave

 

Because You are here !

Standing with me

And I’m in my red Gavilina Gown,

You wanted me to wear in every anniversary..

 

Because You are here !

In front of our mirror

Trying to help me with my chain

But failing …as You are so busy

……… playing with my neckline

And I can’t keep Your hands off me !

…………………………………………….

 

But Baby ?

They don’t believe  me

So they are calling me mad old lady

They are saying You are  go"go.ne

Gosh! The-these words ! ..Noh

No NOuuh

 

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Reviews

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

This is very sweet :) According to Epicurus we are made of atoms - matter - that can't be destroyed, therefore we have to go somewhere when we die because we can't not exist. So why is the theory of ghosts so implausible? I loved the lines "Because you are here!/Standing with me..." So simple and so poignant. Great job.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

feeling like"" let me fly now"" haha thank you so much !! nd actually it wasn't a ghost she was having a phobia of having memory flash around nd she thinks like he is really there and mayb he really is if we say ghost ..and i wish he is there as a ghost ! :D

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

Wow that's even cooler than having him be a ghost! (And here I thought it couldn't get better)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

haha thank you tkank you so much ! u made me happy when i wasn't actually that much confident about it but now i feel positive :)

[MomzillaNC]

A timeless and boundless love reaching beyond the world's narrow acceptance of Life. Very moving poem.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much .glad you liked it : )

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Arsh]

Noouuuuu? I like your "Noouuuu"

Very strong words. Powerfully written with your insights. You cool & delight. I like how your danced upon the words. Emotions/hopes/faith & love... the combination of your heart.. everything's as sexy as you. I liked the starting as well as the ending of the write with all the pleasure of heart. Indeed.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

This one is one of my favorite piece 'I m so glad that u liked it : ) ''and in the Noouu part the girl was crying .. : (

[Arsh]

Well, this poetry's too one of my favorites. Indeed. I can even feel the heartaches/pain and so emotions which're well found into your words. Yes, I know every well, that "Noouuu" is screamed out in pain... even this's why I said, I liked the way you well transformed the pain of your heart into the glass of your tears. Very heartfelt write, ReD one.

[W R Stowe]

very nice such love she had for her mate and yes we can always cherish memories the hold more value than silver and gold. It is like a follow up to "Our Last Dance" that I wrote.You kept me interested to the very end

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much W R Stowe :) I'm really glad. and sure i will have a look on ur too ! :)

[W R Stowe]

Thank you for such an awesome review of Our Last Dance and Happy New Year

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem a lot. You create beautiful place and want. I like the thoughts and the emotion of contentment in the poem. The beautiful artwork and strong description create good visions and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank u so much ! I'm really glad that u liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your poetry.

[MsJewel]

A beautiful and heartfelt poem...
I lost someone I loved very much a few years ago...there are times, I know he is here with me. An angel perhaps?
Your poem touched my heart.

:) Julie

[Lenah Mehzabin]

ohw It's really sorrowful and i m sorry :( .. I'm really happy that i made u feel good as it was relatable .Glad u liked it.
Stay blessed : )

[Fernando Dardón]

Wow, this is so brilliant!! You know I got goosebumps when I read the last lines.
And I didn't know to think it could be good or bad you could actually see someone whose dead now, 'cause I would like to see my grandpa then. But, ¿What does it mean when a spirit is still walking among us? ¿ Does it mean that it hasn't rest? ¿does it mean that he/she has something pending?

This is the way I see it:
There's a place beyond our comprehension and knowledge where souls go, where they belong. But they do not belong here,so they shouldn't be here. And it's easy to know why, because they are no material anymore, so they can't interact with us,or at least not the way other living people do.

Beautiful writing, I love the way it evolves, to the point you realize not only that the person whose the poem talks about is dead but the fact that is present, as a ghost beside her love.
For an instance I thought he was just gone, to somewhere else and left her alone!

Lovely poem!

Fernando

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I 'm really glad that u liked it :-) ..i appreciate the way u felt it but ya he wasn't really there as a ghost she just have a mental phobia of having her past memories flash around nd for few moment she starts living there it's not clear if he actually comes but she believes he does...
Thanks again
Red :-)

[Maumil Mehraj]

A totally magical poem with a beautiful flow to it. I loved it. Two thumbs up!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

aw Thank you so much ! i m really happy dat u liked it :)

[vineyard]

So sweet! They don't go anywhere. They are always there in our heart!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

ya u really got the point :) and thanks for ur sweet review .I'm glad :)

[Moonie]

That's quite a poem! I really enjoyed how you set it up in the opening stanzas. Love the neckline stanza!!! :) However, do you mean "heard" in the 4th line?

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! :) nd oh sorry it will be heard ..it's a typing mistake i didn't notice it before thanks for pointing out .I m going to fix it :)

[Moonie]

You're welcome! It's a beautiful poem!:))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I m really happy that u liked it :)

[Afraa]

Very, very different and unique poem. Mysterious as well. Excellent job at selecting the perfect picture to go with it. Beautiful job, RedHeart.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank uuuuuuuu !! i m really glad that u liked it coz i wrote with all my heart and ya i was in doubt if people will like the picture but now i m happy dat u liked it .thx again :)