Alive

Story that hides ,

Behind thousand smiles

When the person is still alive

With her wounds and cuts everywhere

Tragedy is what you can name it 

"survivor'' is the word suits it..

Now as she is surviving

Now as she is fighting

Now as she is going to bring out the success worth it 

She will rub that in your face 

She will hold her power for forever again ..

But .. Will she be her again?

Will you be able to see the innocent girl ? 

who used to give her all to satisfy your thrust?

That her is dead

Her story is the history

And your future is her revenge..

When she was the beauty of nature !

You simply killed her badly..

looking at her the birds don't sing anymore,flowers never bloom.

even the evil gets shocked  ..but smiles .

 Because they all know about the hidden story 

And obvious destruction of yours..

Reviews

[Arsh]

Thirst's damn gorgeous as long as it just belongs to you. But hardly anyone appreciates it cause, most of people got blind by the rays of infatuation & walked along the desperation of its wildness brought by tempted heart. Very strong piece/painful/emotional/violence/drops of faithless love... all're well structured by the love of yous... written with the drops of your sugary emotions which're meant to be drunk.. by your lovers.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank youuu dear :)) but its an old piece feel so silly with it haha .glad u liked it

[Arsh]

Even the old has always got much worth than the new. In short, Ancient is still on the top that modern.. correct me if am goddamn wrong?

[Gee]

Emotional piece with a very bitter taste.Liked this

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much Gee ! :))

[Gee]

Yore welcome

[Gee]

You're welcome

[Lenah Mehzabin]

: ) ...............

[Clockwork]

From her ashes, she becomes a mighty life-changing force. While she bears the injuries of a betrayal, your speaker takes control of her life in an awe inspiring way. She uses the worst experience of her life to motivate her destiny. She uses the experience of being a survivor, living through someone taking away her ability to be the beauty of nature, and she vows to tell her story to the world. Powerful emotion in this piece.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Yes. u r right ..totally ! .Thank you so much for ur kind view : ))!

[Clockwork]

You're welcome!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Bring it in you Jerk!! i am ready for it... I really loved the passion of revenge here. "Because revenge is sweeter than you ever were".. Loved this poem as it relates to a phase i was in.. it was 1 and a half year back... Keep going girl let your frustation boil.. The coldness of the last stanza when the evil smles will give chills *keep writing babes* God be with you


~Sophy

[Lenah Mehzabin]

THank you so much Sophy .. u r really cool .. Hi5! ;)
The one that hurts us ..what we will get being angel with them ? so here we go ..REVENGE ! :))

[Sophy Freebirds]

Hi5 ! ;) well yes we need to be classy b*****s when situation demands. was a pleasure amiga

[Elie Marie]

wow, this one left me speechless.
For what it says, for what it represents, and for the feelings it poked at in me.
Strong poem.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much dear ! glad u liked it :))

[Lupus Kaos]

Made me think of a girl (could be a boy as well in another poem) with great value as a person who resorts to self-mutilation.Really strong and made me think of sad situations as well as happy moments.Still, thank you, it was exceptional.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

thanku so much for such a unique view & right understanding of my poetry i'm really glad :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the poem.
"Now as she is surviving
Now as she is fighting
Now as she is going to bring out the success worth it
She will rub that in your face
She will hold her power for forever again .."
It is sad but true. People who are wounded will get up stronger and colder. Terrible when the innocent of youth is destroyed. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Antoñyo]

Hints of brilliance in this piece, wow.

Now as she is surviving
Now as she is fighting
Now as she is going to bring out the success worth it

even the evil gets shocked ..but smiles

...I was caught off guard by the power this early morn.
Thanks for the awesome share!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! :) i am glad from de centre of my heart that u liked it and yes you really understood it ..it reveals a power ..

[B-poet]

There's a gripping depth that stands out in this entire poem. Nice work. A candid & creative read. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much for your Thoughtful comment ! .. :)

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

I really liked the last two stanzas, especially the part about even evil being shocked by how dark the girl has become. Nice job :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank u very much .. :)