Bubbles

BUBBLES

 

I stare at the bubbles in the air

How nice is it not to not have a care

A wonderful bliss of floating and flying

While we're stuck on the ground hurting and crying

 

Author's Note

* Another one of my amateur pieces

Reviews

[Michael Carr]

really sweet. not mind blowing, but a simple, childlike piece.
easy rhyme and imagery.
well done.

[~amanda~]

adorable! i imagined a child playing in a bathtub with their parents in the next room doing bills or figuring out something complicated. it conjures up really good imagery