"Bipolar"

Personal to me.

"Bipolar"

Davide Galasso

 

 

 

"Don't even come a single step closer.

 

flare my adrenaline.

 

and step into, the fire.

 

into the..

 

the pyre

 

 

Spiralling down, not a single sound

 

Now follow my words;

 

 

Dance in a row,

 

dance nice and slow.

 

Now follow me children,

 

don't you make a sound, and don't you fall down.

 

 

Bloody twisted malice, in sweet intent.

 

I like you this way.

 

Tell you why I like you this way.

 

Be this way, be this way,

how I like you this way."

Reviews

[DevilsNeedLove2]

Oh, how I know that monster! I absolutely LOVE this poem. You have some very vivid imagery here, and I especially like the repetitiveness of the last three lines. I don't know if this was purposeful on your part, but it makes me think of the obsessive, sort of sing-song thoughts that often come along with this fantastic (sarcastic) illness.

Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Chistie]

Good job!! A picture of my brother came to mind as i read this poem. I feel bad for those who suffer from this disease and you captured it very well. Good Job

[Staci Brown]

you certainly captured being bi-polar! a few of my friends and my mother came to mind as i read your words... well one!

Welcome to the Cafe!

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Windy]

I kind of know what you are talking about I have a niece that is bi polar and I feel so awful for her and for her whole family. It is such a harsh "reality". Good write here.

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

I don't know what it is but theres something about this I love.

But put a space between your name and the beginning of hte poem?