Speed

Speed

A Poem by QuothCorvid

Do something you shouldn't

Push the acelerator to the floor on the open highway
Enjoy the breeze, freedom
The vroom of the engine as the world around you blurrs
Like the paints in a watercolor






© 2010 QuothCorvid


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I knew you will like vroom, vroom.. I do .. and the adrenaline is out of this World..

Posted 14 Years Ago


The simplest things are most beautiful. Wonderful command over the reader. I actually felt like moving and doing all of this at the end. The last line, the simile, "like the paints in a watercolor," was the perfect closign that touched my imagination. Really enoyed this. Thanks so much for sharing.
gionelly*kiss

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 15, 2010
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QuothCorvid
QuothCorvid

Manassas, VA



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