Cheating

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She had feelings for him
They would talk for hours
She never crossed that line
Or did she
Did she cheat in her heart?

Did she start to love a man other then her husband?
Did she love another man
Or the idea of what if

What if I did this
What if he and I were no more
Would I miss him?

Talk to other man
Laugh with other man
Share with other man

Is this cheating?
What should she do?
Too many years to throw away

Confused
Keep dancing her dance
Not sure what to do

Is this passing infatuation
What happens if I throw it all away
Will I end up all alone

If he is not enough for me
Will any one ever be enough?
Concern

Reviews

[Lucia Morgan]

honestly, i hope you dont mind, it wasnt my favorite. it was good, but a little too simplistic. the messsage was good though and i think you have something. work on it a bit, and like Undying Glory said, its a little unclear in some places. i would definatly like to see more complexity and abstractions. i hope you're not mad at me.

[Simple_mee]

A nice one. I agree with Coyote Poery, Temptation can lead us afray...
The ending lines were awesome. The usage of the word "concern" was a good thought.
Well done !! ;))

[Dimitri]

Loved these lines

"If he is not enough for me
Will any one ever be enough?
Concern"

and I love that you finish with the word concern. I liked a lot all the feelings that you grouped together in this poem, good work!

[MagiCrystal]

it is cheating in the Heart and mind.. yes
Love your innocent poem and the truth in it..

Is this passing enfatuation ((((( infatutation ) correct word))))
What happens if I throw it all away
Will I end up all alone

Yes.. Love it.. amazing flow

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't go to bars. I don't attempt to get close to beautiful woman. Man is not smart. A beautiful woman can steal his soul. I got marry 17 years ago. I decided this is it. Poem is very good. Temptation can lead us to a fire we can't put out. Last question. Could be a concern when we are looking for comfort elsewhere. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Undying Glory]

interesting work. although some parts of it were a bit unclear, overall this is a good poem. keep it up!