When Angels Stay Forgotten

 

As blanket falls upon my face,

My lungs forget the air,

There is only I around me,

Who knows if you are there.

In darkness waits an echo,

And if face had matched the voice,

Can eyes distinguish all that’s lost?

When angels stay forgotten?

Reviews

[Toni Nicole]

You have a very strong use of emotion.
Good, subtle word choice.

Granted, this could be anything, you should tell me the inspiration.

[laceyjane23]

good job! very simple yet complex! i enjoyed reading it!
laceyjane