At NightA Story by QuiteOllieA cross between a short story and prose about strange people and strange nature. The
earth at the foot of the hill was black like molten tar in the moonlight. I
poked it with my trainer, uneasy and reluctant to wait for much longer. She had
said she would be there soon. Eventually, after a few more pokes at the
unfamiliar mud and checking my phone more times than necessary just so I didn't
look too out of place, I recognised the silhouette of Carrie walking
purposefully towards me on the cobbles. She was smiling slightly but it was a
natural smile. There was no effort involved. I think she was just happy to see
I'd come. Her delicate feet echoed around the small street as she made her way
to the bottom of the hill and her eyes were like cats' in the streetlights. She
stopped next to me and looked down. Somehow I hadn't noticed until that point
that she was holding a small white plastic box, like a lunchbox, with very
rough holes punctured in the lid. She reached her thin and slender hand over to
mine and led me up the hill. She hummed a tune I think I used to know and
showed no expression on her face other than that one set smile. But that was
Carrie. That was what she did. We climbed the wet and well-cut grass of the hill
until we reached a huge rock, the size of a small car perhaps and coming out of
the hill itself. Carrie began to elegantly and effortlessly make her way to the
top of the rock and I followed without question. I don't know how she didn't
drop the box or even falter in her determination to reach the top, but she
managed it. And I, less-than-gracefully, clambered up behind her. Grabbing hold
of the huge boulder in the damp and mossy nooks and crannies that, it seemed,
could only have been made for this purpose. I could feel soil and grit
gathering between my fingers and beneath my nails as I steadily ascended in
pursuit of Carrie. Finally, I hauled my tired and unprepared body
onto the top of the rock. Carrie sitting, waiting for me, with the box in hand
and what was now a slightly unnerving smile on her face. Panting heavily, I
shuffled alongside her and stared out at the scene before us. You could see the
entire village from that spot. The labyrinths of houses and corner shops that
make up a place like that and we were above it all. And with the moon
reflecting off the plastic drainpipes and optimistic greenhouses it was like
looking at a perfect black and white photo. Something that would be on the
cover of a guide to the history of this small piece of the world. Carrie was looking out at the view too. I reached
over to the lid of the box but she rested her hand, once again, on mine and
looked at me with a subtle pleading look in her eyes. She was asking that I
didn't ask. That I appreciated this moment regardless of the box. We turned our
eyes back to the village at the same time and I couldn't help but notice that
her hand was still on mine, only now it really was resting. We were both at
ease. Beyond the village we could see the forest and, beyond that, the sea. I
like to think that when looking at a view with someone you see it completely
differently to each other. One person will notice the perfect moon reflected in
the sea first, another will see the way the trees in the forest sway in a
certain and repeatedly rehearsed rhythm first and maybe even hear this rhythm
too. But give it enough time and everyone will see all there is to see. At this point a small grass snake slithered onto
my crossed legs and made its way onto my arm. The one connected with Carrie's.
I gasped slightly, and so did Carrie, but neither of us did anything else. We
just watched the snake as it passed from my body onto hers and then down and
onto the ground again. Carrie smiled a little as she watched the last flick of
the snake's tail as it disappeared into the dark. She turned to me and stared
into my eyes. This time with an unexpected excitement for what was about to
happen. She pushed and pulled her body around until she was sat, still with
crossed legs, facing me with the box on the rocky surface between us. She put a
cold and pale hand on my cheek and looked at me. She smiled. Then she nodded
slightly and I nodded back. As she pulled back the lid of the plastic box, I
lent forwards to peer inside. Lying in the bottom was a snake, much like the
one we had just seen. Or at least it seemed it at first. The night made it
difficult to tell the colour of the creature but as Carrie tilted the box
towards me the moon seemed to glisten on the skin of the snake and I saw it
clearly for the first time. Its scales were blood red and it had another head
where the end of its tail should have been. But the fantastic monster was
lifeless. Just as the moonlight hit its skin when Carrie tilted the box the
entire body of the creature slid across the dull plastic. Its eyes were wide
open, all four of them. They were brilliant white with dark green pupils. This
was not a snake. I glanced up at Carrie who seemed entranced by the
whole thing. She watched the corpse of the beautiful creature as it tumbled
into the corner of the box. She tilted the container this way and that, always
watching. It was a disturbing entertainment for her that I didn't anticipate.
Eventually I couldn't take it any longer and I grabbed one of the edges of the
plastic. I looked her in the face and shook my head gently. She simply nodded
and replaced the lid. I took the box from her and stood up. The damp of the
rock had soaked through my jeans by now and dirt was all over my hands and,
because of that, all over the box as well.
Not looking back, I left Carrie on the rock as I
quietly and quickly returned to the bottom of the hill. I made my way back
across the village with the box in my hands and my footsteps echoing in the
empty streets. © 2013 QuiteOllie |
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Added on June 13, 2013 Last Updated on June 13, 2013 Tags: prose, short story, snake, mythical creature, night, catching, monsters, beauty, nature Author
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