Six Word Short Story

How much can six words say?

See.

Fall.

Love.

Lost.

Break.

Repeat.

Author's Note

I heard of six word short stories, especially the famous one allegedly by Ernest Hemingway: "Baby shoes for sale. Never worn." And this Facebook page was looking for entries for a SWSS contest, so I created this. I don't think anyone else entered, I just know I won the small poem contest.

Reviews

[Mike Cole]

It always interests me how much 6 words divided can have little to no impact but when put together in the right way can really have an affect on how someone thinks. You did a really good job of putting this together. Although short it was a good read and I really like reading what you've written. Keep it up!

[QuirkyPanda]

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :D

[reeyce smythe wilder]

I.
Love.
This.
One.
Very.
Much. ;)

[QuirkyPanda]

Hahahahaha!!!! I see what you did there, very very clever ;)

[Wolfwind]

That's awesome! Reminds me of an old typewriter, where you had to manually bring it back over to the left hand side of the page after each line!. Great little story!

Aaron - Wolfwind

[Britt Foster]

Apparently they can say quite a lot!

This is beautiful. Its simplicity almost speaks to the simplicity that is truly life -- the repetition that comes with relationships when we are continually seeking that /one/ that we never seem to find. It's a vicious cycle of butterflies and heartbreak, and still we try again and again.

[QuirkyPanda]

Thank you for taking the time to comment, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :D