Crush Or Create

Crush Or Create

A Poem by Caitlyn
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Questioning the hard times

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Finally, victory.

Yet I feel like the problem has come right back and tackled me full on.

What's the point if it feels like this?

Maybe I should give up.

Or maybe I should just stop second guessing myself.

Or maybe I should just take it one day at a time.

But why is that so hard?

My head's caught between my parents.

My heart's caught between myself and a boy.

My spirit has been crushed and torn.

This is too much for one being to take.

I would turn to suicide but there's so much I can do in the future.

My potential is great.

But the encouragement is very little.

I have turned to depression but all it did was suppress me more.

My creativity was stunted.

But the determination built higher.

I will turn to a boy but choosing him over myself will be strange.

My confidence finally up.

But the choice is his to crush or create.

© 2008 Caitlyn


Author's Note

Caitlyn
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated as well as questions and comments.

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I really like this poem. It is a time of confusion; however, the victories can be so glorious! Just remember that it isn't a boy who can crush or create you, although the feelings you may recieve from him may give you an immediate high. Never choose a boy over your own self worth. You are an incredible person. So creative, sensitive, beautiful and intelligent. The boy you want to be with encourages all your strengths and never makes you feel left behind. :) Kimi

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2008

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Caitlyn
Caitlyn

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People always tell me I have a lot of things going for me, I just realized that they may be right. Loving to get constructive criticism and comments, My mind is always open to other views. more..

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