Love

Love

A Poem by Caitlyn
"

Within simplicity lies power.

"

 

In a world where yield is understood as hit the gas

And children are raised by television,

Where lives are ruled by addictions

And every mistake is someone else's fault,

It's amazing how meeting one person

Can change your whole outlook on the world.

Where a smile towards someone who's troubled

And holding a door open isn't so hard,

In a world where what comes around, goes around

And you couldn't care less if karma existed,

Because you're already on top of the world

Happier than you thought possible

With the person you love.

© 2008 Caitlyn


Author's Note

Caitlyn
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated as well as questions and comments.

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This is breathtaking. I love it.

Beautiful poem and idea!
Kudos!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I agree with the ideals you are conveying here. Love and finding that special person can make ALL the difference in the world. Excellent work!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very true! Good poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I thought this poem was very good. I like how it shows how love can change your perspective on things in life. I think I would have liked if it was a little bit longer, but otherwise it was great. =) Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Caitlyn
Caitlyn

Huntington Beach, CA



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