Can You Hear Me?!?!

Can you hear me?,

I am screaming your name,

On my knees,

Crying for you to come back,

Can you hear me,

Yelling at you,

All the good times,

You keep walking,

Rain pouring on top of me,

While you are walking into a shimmering light,

I am alone,

You were the best,

Why are you leaving now(?),

Can you hear me(?)

Screaming for you not to go(!),

How will i see you(?),

Everything will change(!),

I am running toward you,

But it just seems like you are farther and farther away each step,

I fall,

You turn to see,

But your face is filled with tears and happiness at the same time,

Why(?),

Why is life so cruel!,

Can't you stay?,

No..,

Its not right,

I scream for you to come back with thunder,

Roaring everywhere,

You walk through the light,

While i lay crying on the wet cool grass,

Thunder and Lighting flashing everywhere you turn,

You can not hear me now,

Never again will you be able to hear me.

 

 

Reviews

[Rockebah]

I can feel the emotions leaping from this poem. Beautifully done

[Kelly Catherine.]

HOLY CRAP WEASA I DIDNT KNOW YOU HAD IT IN YOU!!!!!!!! HOLY SHITALKINGMUSHROOMZ THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!

[Violeta]

really good job, you have grown has a writter.

one little complain, its too small to read for me (or I am too blind) but truly beautifull.