Breathless

Breathless

A Poem by QuietlyCrash

Your eyes leave me
haunted
Your touch leaves me
cold
I tried to escape you
but I'm trapped in your
hold
I adore your breathless 
whisper
I hate your bittersweet 
glance
While we fight and make endless
love in our dead end
romance
I love the way we fight when we tangle
together
You bite and I punch while we
fight to the
death
I hold to you tightly while we
gasp for each 
breath

© 2013 QuietlyCrash


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i love this!! although i think you meant "i hold to you tightly" and not your?
it doesn't distract from how much i love it though. a beautiful telling of a love/hate relationship.

Posted 11 Years Ago


QuietlyCrash

11 Years Ago

Aw thank you so much for your lovely review and yes I meant "to you tightly" oops. Thanks for pointi.. read more
"I adore your breathless
whisper
I hate your bittersweet
glance
While we fight "
Wow . A very nice poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on May 10, 2013
Last Updated on June 6, 2013
Tags: love, hate, passion, breath, poem, dark, quiet

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QuietlyCrash
QuietlyCrash

Pensacola, FL



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Hello, so here's the deal. I was placed on this glowing green orb and still trying to figure it all out For the moment most of my writing may be depressing and dark, but that's just because I'm sort .. more..

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