S.O.S.

He curls his hands around me

like the way he curls his smoke

Sickly sweet and deadly

His eyes hold the apocalypse,

the ending of my world 

I'm lost

My heart will capsize

in his depths

For my mind has ceased its

control

Reviews

[Cool Handless Luke]

Love at first sight in deadly form? Very nicely worded. Captivating. It's short but I think the lack of expanding and explaining lends to the air of mystery and opens up a world where every reader can read into it and make it apply to their own lives. I love the opening lines.

[Sami Khalil]

"His eyes hold the apocalypse,

the ending of my world

I'm lost."
That is some good poetry...:)