When I remember us

Whenever I remember us I think back to this moment

I'm lying next to the song of your heartbeat

Your fingers softly drumming on the back of my neck

We are quietly content with our cocoon of summer

After many nights spent with complicated breathing and wandering minds and hands

It feels marvelous to just be at peace within our own world

You kiss me and it tastes like wine

The moment is innocent and impure all at once and I love it

No one could have prepared me for a moment like this

A moment so tender and slow 

You whisper my name like it's your beautiful secret

Whenever I remember us I think back to this moment

My only hope is that so do you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Memory comes with regret, thank the Gods for Vodka in my case.


It still moved me to a point of swoon.

[Sami Khalil]

"No one could have prepared me for a moment like this

A moment so tender and slow

You whisper my name like it's your beautiful secret."
Some beautiful poetry...Well penned...:)

[Charisma Moonfairy]

This is absolutely beautiful beyond words, such a pure love and devotion that can be read in each and every phrase said, very well written

[QuietlyCrash]

Thank you so much. I appreciate that.

[Lux]

I think this is an amazing poem, you created a wonderful scene. I love it!

[QuietlyCrash]

Thank you so much!