I Love You

I do love him..

I Love You

Once again, your back

Once I saw your name

I was happy and excited

But at the same time, scared

I just can’t believe it

You walked in and out of my life

Twice, and I still want you

The feelings are still there

I love you so much

You just give me this feeling

That no one else can give

I can talk to you about anything

And not feel weird

Or telling a sin

You make me feel comfortable

And you listen

But after all theses feelings

I still have that one question

In the back of my head

Are you here to stay this time?

Will you leave me like the other times?

How can I trust you after everything?

I want you so bad, more then anything

Because I know we are good for each other

Your depressed, I’m unhappy

Having us, might be the key out

Because we were happy

When everything was right with us

While everything else was wrong

But you and I, was beautiful

You’re the only one that can heal my heart

I’ve tried a new person, didn’t work

I got my friends back, didn’t work

My family never knows about my emotion

But you.. Know where it hurts, why it does

How to touch, where to be, when to fix

I knew I could never forget

Or keep you away

I knew you’d be back

Because I know when you say

I love you, you mean every word

Reviews

[sleeve]

after reading, I can tell your heart is confused, this is a good piece cos I can understand it, great work quietpoet

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is very honest poetry..you are very true to your feelings..
i would suggest you structure your emotions and words more..there is so much going on your work simultaneously that it may get difficult to keep a track where you are going...i hope you get what i am trying to say..best of luck.

[Deegan]

I can totally relate. I like how you don't pause once with punctuation to let your thoughts sink in, but you overwhelm the entire poem with your emotions and you don't care what you say at this point. Well done :)

[ashley]

Oh sweetie, just be careful! This is a beautiful poem, filled with hopeful longing. I just hope you're careful... Remember: "Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me."
Good luck with this. :D