Take It All Away

Take It All Away

Every where I turn

Always getting treated

Like I’m nothing at all

Back to trusting no one

 

Take it all away,

I don’t want it anymore

My heart can barely beat

My eyes are all cried out

 

I’m tired of all the

Liars, cheaters, players, fakers

Just be up straight about it

Why spend all that time, for nothing

 

Take it all away,

I don’t care anymore

This heart is just fading

And I’m done listening

 

So many made me believe

That they were different

Than all the rest

It was just all bull s**t

 

Take it all away

All the belief I had

Every trust I given

All the faith and promise

 

I can never be the same

There’s just no hope

The past swallows me whole

And I run… Fast, from this

Reviews

[Soul Magic✯]

emotions very well convey in this piece... real talk it's definitely enough. great ink

[HorrorMaster]

Very good I understand how you feel. *takes away your sadness*

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very emotive write..Sunflower..

[R J Askew]

Learning how multi-faced the world and people can be is a hard lesson. But once we have learned it we are better able to pick and choose who and what we associate with. Even then we will be caught out. But one person we must always be albe to trust is ourselves. if we are true in and to ourselves we are better able to deal with falsehood and disappiintment from others.

[Frantzuu]

Another great write, you didn't write anything for a while, couldn't wait for that one :D

[deeps]

A very well written write here.
I like this it speaks of truth, very well written and stated.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh this one is filled with emotions sooo sad.. occassionally everyone can feel overwhelmed when things go wrong.. running won't work though cause a person can never run from what is inside them. In reality if you can find that 2 or 3 best friends in a whole lifetime.. you are sooo lucky.. and have to meet many people to find them.

There are different types of friends you can trust or not trust on different levels I believe.. it's hard sometimes to know the difference when you can't read another person's mind! Just have fun.. cause trying to hard never works.. just like looking for love.. you usually find it when you're not looking! Loved this for the honesty flowing out.. I think alot of people can relate to this!

[Coyote Poetry]

At a point we want the truth. Hard to swim in B.S for too long. The poem is outstanding. I like the purpose and the story. A outstanding poem.
Coyote