My Walls

A dear friend of mine inspired me to write this. I've been wanting to, the words just came together after reading his.

 

My Walls

As I sail alone, once again

The sand has never felt so deep

I’m drowning in the ocean

As my walls are building

They aren’t breaking

Just grower higher

So no one can climb over

I’ve had so many break them down

But most of them just kept

The pieces lying there

I need someone to break it down

And pick up every piece

Make me trust and believe this time

I want to stick to one

I don’t want to keep starting over

The whole process again

Then it ends to be nothing

Just hurt, cries, and another wall

Why is it I’m always standing alone

On this battle field of love

I always got my guard up

But somehow something always gets through

I want someone who will love me for me this time

And mean every word they say

Because I can’t take the lies anymore

I’ve been missing something in me

For a very long time,

Its time to find it

Where ever it may be

But till then,

My walls are staying high

And they are stronger then ever

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Sounds like you are not being honest
with men and with yourself.
Do you answer nice overtures from men
who probably feel the same ? Do you ?
Are you a committed friend ? If not, how can
you expect anything to start ?
Do you just rule everyone out without being
even friendly ? Think about it .

This is an excellent poem. The writer makes
her point, even if it is fantasy, she takes the
reader directly into her confidence.

Excellent writing .

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Soul Magic✯]

very well expressed. the wall is like a protection blanket for the heart. i've been in that road before. very well written

[Frantzuu]

wow great piece of writing, you bring the reader into your head, you make the reader feel your pain, you've put so much into this and it shows. great job I like it a lot. :D

[Thomas Fleet]

I really liked reading this. It shows just how much love can hurt and how hard it is to trust someone, and how we build up walls to protect ourselves. My favorite lines are 4-7. Thanks for sharing. :D

[deeps]

On this battle field of love
I always got my guard up
But somehow something always gets through

I like these lines here, This is quite the emotional read here.
I know these feeligs and have been there a time or two.
Very well written and expressed.