I See

Patients at work.

I See

Do you ever get the urge

To just walk up to someone

Tell them to sit and you’ll listen

To all that needs to be said

 

I do..

 

I haven’t seen you back,

Sometimes I wish I could,

Just to see if your alright

And to know if your still breathing

 

I care..

 

Someone told me that

You were sleep walking

With a knife in your hand

And it’s the reason why your back

 

I notice..

 

They told us that you have

Been snorting sugar

Kids will be kids

But how do you know how to snort

 

I wonder..

 

Nothing makes me feel

Higher than to see

Them smile and laugh

Its like a lullaby for me

 

I love..

 

I wonder if you notice

That I sit and stare

At all of you

Just wanting to know

 

I think..

 

I see and do care

I notice and wonder

I love and think about all of you

Every day, every minute, every time

Reviews

[Haifa]

I like it so much and I like the way how you wrote it and the style. What I can say more... Just keep writing and well done.
Haifa

[Hippy]

thats cool man so wat kind of work do oyu do i was just wondering that so much

[Tate Morgan]

I like that you can listen i have trouble with it myself

[Bud]

Everyone starts out as a sponge. Will it be water or gasoline that we learn to soak up? Clean or dirty? It's up to the sponge holder to determine what gets soaked up... Outstanding.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

They told us that you have
Been snorting sugar
Kids will be kids
But how do you know how to snort

that is a real good question... kids are very impressionable... they see and want to do

[Frantzuu]

wow that's just great, I love your work, amazing stuff. :D

[Antonio Valentino]

Knowing what you do for a living Kylie, oh my god, this just broke my heart into a thousand pieces. You are such a wonderfull soul, how lucky I am to know you. Especially as a friend.

Love ya!
Antonio

[Bette]

this is a beautiful tribute to them, well done!

[closed account]

I liked this it was very creative and very well thought out!

[rockinmiley555]

this is so.... real. it brings truth to what kids and teens are doing these days that adults are un-aware of... its also sad though. all in all, great read.