I'm Moving On

I'm Moving On

 

Relationships really haven’t been my thing

I can never keep one for long

I either get hurt

Or I end up hurting them

 

My first one, well it wasn’t really one

For him, it was just a hook up

But for me, it was a lot more

Seems like that’s how it always is

 

I cried the hardest over him

He was the only one that has

Truly hurt my heart

But I’ve moved on

 

The next one, well it only lasted 6 months

Because he turned out to be weird

I thought he would become violent with me one day

So I had to break his heart

 

He wasn’t really what I wanted anyway

I cried in my mom’s arms that day

That was the first time I had to do that

But I’ve moved on

 

The one after that one, was by far the best one

He really was there for me

Well he did live in another state

And that’s why I had to let him go

 

I really needed someone here

He has become my best friend

I know I can count on him

And that’s made me move on

 

All after that I decided to stay single

And have a little fun

I started hooking up

Wasn’t me at all, I hated it

 

So I changed myself

Into someone I thought was smarter

Then falling for the games

But I was stupid

 

I met someone new

Someone completely different

He filled me with so many

Words, that turned into lies

 

He ended up cheating on me

The entire time we were together

We spend a whole month

Just to find out it was all for nothing

 

He didn’t even say goodbye

No phone call, no text, nothing

And everyone looks at me

With this confused face..

 

Because I don’t show hurt

At all, I’ve always been that way

I don’t show emotion well

I just don’t like people seeing me like that

 

They were all expecting me to cry

But I haven’t, not even a tear

I handle it my own way

That’s just me

 

I will admit I am hurt

But I can’t let it bring me down

Why cry, when it was his loss

Now I’m moving on..

Reviews

[Bud]

Your work is always so personal. You share yourself completely. Unquestionably. Life is never easy, and most certainly never fair... depending on your definition of fair. It's ALWAYS more give than take. At least for those of heart who really care... Excellent.

[HorrorMaster]

Very good and this poem is right for you that you should move on from after a heart broke. I know is hard.

[Subjective Sanity]

Very well done! It sounds brave. I like that. : )

[Frantzuu]

Great piece, deeply profound and touching,
nice work. :D

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this one ... sometimes dating can be a learing experience and a hard one at the but when everything seems at the lowest the right one will find you... nice job!!

[Soul Magic✯]

"I will admit I am hurt

But I can’t let it bring me down

Why cry, when it was his loss" very well expressed. dont let anyone bring you down. you did the right thing... keep you head up. there are plenty of good fish in the sea. thanks for sharing this piece with us *hugs*

Now I’m moving on..

[ashley]

You'll find someone... and all these guys, (especially the first and the last) are pricks that don't deserve to have you. So f**k em, you're great. Keep your head up and your eyes open, cause the one is just around the corner, waiting to meet you.
:D