Have Me For Eternity

Have Me For Eternity

Tonight I really don’t wanna be alone

If there’s anyone that wants me tonight

Please come and take me away with you

Just hold me all night along

Till you know I’m alright to go

I don’t know why I feel this way

Especially on a day like today

I’m a happy human being

Just alone one

I always think about having someone

Where I would go to his house

And just cuddle and watch a movie

Or he would take me out to dinner

Show me off to the world

And have a bunch of laughs

He will be there for me

Whenever I feel I need to cry

He won’t say a word

Because he will already know

Or just let me get it all out

And I would be there for him
When everything goes wrong

And I’m the only thing that’s right

Because in my arms everything can go away

I want to be distracted by him always

Where everyone around disappears

I wanna think about him all day

So much I miss him

And I can’t stand being away

So I make the drive just to see him

And he does the same for me

What I really want is love

I might say I’m scared of it

But I don’t want anything more than that

Deep down my heart aches for it

So tonight, I need anyone to take me

And make me theirs for eternity

Reviews

[Elanra]

the longing for love is soo strong in this it almost made me cry. I felt that way for a looooong time.

its a little raw... but otherwise nicely put and easy to understand. you hadnt over-whelmed it with unnecessary words and adjectives. I liked that. It has a natural flow. You lost the rhyme here and and there but at some parts rhymes are soo good it kinda makes up for it.

You have a big potencial. Good write.