She’s Way Gone

She's just so.. Helpless..

She’s Way Gone

I catch myself staring at you

I block everyone else out

Just the way you look so sad

Gets my attention

You don’t care who is around

Or who sees you this way

I just feel like there’s no hope

I wanna be inside your head

To hear your thoughts

Find out what happened

What went terribly wrong

For you to feel this depressed

Now that your mom is gone,

There’s no one left

Your on suicide watch

I feel so helpless

And you’re a stranger

But I still care

I wonder what you did

When you found out she was dead

I just wanna hug you

And tell you its going to be alright

But I don’t want to lie

When I have no idea if it will be..

Reviews

[deeps]

I like this one alot, I am with Yos one of yoru best here. Like it

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats one of your best Kylie, expressed so beautifully how you feel and what a wonderful soul you are ... Thank you

[bluessadmood]

I really liked this..it touched me in a way..
i look at you and block all others,its sadness calls my attention
wanna be inside you,hear your thoughts,find where you are
she is gone now way out of your hand,it must be killing you
strange but still i care,wonder whats with you
wanna hug you and tell its alright,i wonder if it ever is
something here really nice ,the emotions go way far
i really loved this...
lovely write

[George Love]

A little choppy, but it fits the subject exceptionally well. Raw emotion on both sides, darkness, helplessness and sympathy. Well done!