Deep Into You

Deep Into You

A Poem by QuietPoet

Deep Into You
A part of me wishes
You never told me how you feel
Because I can’t get it off my mind
And I miss you all the time now
I feel like my heart is going to burst
Because of all the things you’ve said
Your feelings have made me happy
But they also have torn me up
Because knowing you feel this way
And we can’t be together
Hurts me so much
I cry myself to sleep
Wishing you were here with me
Don’t be scared baby
Just come to me now
We’ll work it out somehow
I just want that love with you
There’s no one else that can
As the rain comes down tonight
So does the tears in my eyes
I can’t stop them
Because I’m so deep into you
And there’s just no going back
I can’t keep my feeling tucked away
I just want you..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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How beautiful. Great Job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


bah.. i can totally relate to this... i have a long distance relationship and its freaking hard but if love is there, it can work out. It will ^_^

raw but vert nicely written... good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very sad , I am sorry thats how you feel , I know how hard it is , sending you hugs , Yossi

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such an emotional write here, I can feel this one. Wonderfully expressed feelings here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on December 8, 2009
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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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