Just A Dream

Just A Dream

A Poem by QuietPoet

Just A Dream

I had this dream
Where I was having a baby
And I was walking in the hospital
No one was paying attention to me
The doctors wouldn’t see me
The baby was going to come out of me
I felt it below my legs
Then it showed me in the bed
And my family were all around me
I saw all their smiles
They were happy for me
The nurse gave my baby to me
And I was holding it
Like it was the only thing alive
So precious and beautiful
But I didn’t see my husband there
I was alone, I didn’t know the father
But I thought of him
And I wondered if it was his
Oh, I wished it so
It was a dream, but it felt so real
I felt the pain and the baby
I woke up and I wished it was true
I thought about the baby all day
And I wanted to be that happy

© 2009 QuietPoet


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That was very endearing... sounds like your material nature is in full bloom.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Dreams can tell us a lot about what is on our minds, what's in our hearts or on our conscious. It appears that you have settling down in life on your mind, but you are feeling uncertain who it will be with. Sometimes, dreams can be a foretelling of things to come or a warning. Be patient. Life will take it's course in due time. We all want to have that special someone to love, and to have a family with. If you rush the the fermenting of the grape juice, then it won't become a fine wine. It will only be soured grapes, instead. Life is such as that.
Make the most of all your moments. Outstanding work of art, Kylie.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a beuatiful write here, I like this, yes this is full of hope I agree there.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Liked this alot...a very interesting dreamm..very well expressed... overall nice job on this one~!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats so beautiful Dream :-) .... full with so much hope !

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on December 4, 2009

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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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