I Have..

I Have..

A Poem by QuietPoet

I Have..
Have you ever imagined
Yourself in a car crash
And everyone you know
Flashed before your eyes
I have..

 

Have you ever imagined
Someone dying in your arms
When you tried so hard to help
But there was nothing you could do
I have..

 

Have you ever imagined
Losing someone really close
Just thinking about it
Brings deep tears to your eyes
I have..

 

Have you ever imagined
Having a gun put to your head
They pulled the trigger
And you saw your funeral
I have..

 

Have you ever imagined
Yourself being all alone
Because you pushed everyone away
And they wouldn’t accept you back
I have..

 

Have you ever imagined
All these things
And just want it all to go away
To just feel happy
I have..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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this is very deep and hits just the right place somewhere around the stomach. it makes you wince while you read and also makes you feel alone.

there is also sense of helplessness and desperation emitting from this poem.. both very hurting yet the perfect flavour for the words. Great rhyming, never once twitches and I liked the way the lines arent long.

*applauds* Well done. This surely gives the sense of the silent pain from a QuietPoet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is very deep. It is much darker than mine, but I like this a lot.Good job! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very deep, i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I have... Outstanding!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well I know one thing. I 'HAVE' just seen a piece that holds so much talent and imagery inside that I am in awe.. We all imagine things like this, but you have brought forth what others just merely think on.. Great job!

Mags xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Have you ever imagined
Yourself being all alone
Because you pushed everyone away
And they wouldn't accept you back
I have..

I so know these feelings here,
I really like this write
It does show strength!
Very well written and expressed!
Wonderful and emotional write from you.




Posted 14 Years Ago


this is very deep and hits just the right place somewhere around the stomach. it makes you wince while you read and also makes you feel alone.

there is also sense of helplessness and desperation emitting from this poem.. both very hurting yet the perfect flavour for the words. Great rhyming, never once twitches and I liked the way the lines arent long.

*applauds* Well done. This surely gives the sense of the silent pain from a QuietPoet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's one of the strongest poems I ever read, you have so much talent, so beautifully you express yourself and your feelings, What can I say more... it describe whats going on in your head , no wonder you so confused, sometime ... if you ever need my help, you know how to find me , Thank you, Yossi

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 8, 2009

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QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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