Put Me Back Together

Put Me Back Together

A Poem by QuietPoet
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This song is my profile song, if anyone wants to listen. You should, everyone should. This poem is very personal to me. Its really deep, more than anyone will ever know..

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Put Me Back Together

 

"I don't wanna feel like this tomorrow
I don't wanna live like this today
Make me feel better
I wanna feel better
Stay with me here
And never surrender
Make me feel better,
You make me feel better
You make me feel better
Put me back together..."
By Skillet

 

I’m driving in my car
And this song is playing
I have it as loud as it can go
I’m singing it at the top of my lungs
So loud my throat begins to hurt
This is what I am wanting
Maybe if I sing it loud enough
Someone, just anyone will hear me
But I’m driving fast
Passing all the cars
I know they hear the music
But do they take notice of the girl singing it
Do they hear the lyrics being screamed
No, just the drums and guitars
They see my black car go by
I don’t care if its loud today
It needs to be, for me to stay calm
I play the song over and over
As it get to the end of it
When it gets to the part
“Put me back together”
He sings it rough as I sing it soft
And the tears roll down my cheeks
Because I’ve been wanting that
Ever since this heart has been torn
I arrive at the place I call home
My car shuts off so does the music
But the song keeps playing over and over..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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J.M
I know just what you mean about playing a song over and over because then you feel understood. That was very nicely expressed her, and the emotion really came through with the words. A beautiful and genuine poem. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Splendid poem:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


HEY QP nice song and the lyrics explain why you are such a talented writer. You keep yourself aroung so much talent it just oozes out of you. I enjoyed this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very beautifully written

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice piece. A song has a way of doing that to you. It plays over and over again in our minds.. You will be fine. All things work out!
Have faith!!!

Mags xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Bud
God hears you, and He's working on it. Just be patient... Excellent, Kylie! I like it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh! The songs that stick to our minds sometimes.
I know that feeling. I also like the feelings you put into this.
This is a wonderfully written write!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2009
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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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