Falling Down

Falling Down

A Poem by QuietPoet

Falling Down
This heart of mine
Is so weak tonight
Theses eyes of mine
Just keep leaking tears
This soul of mine
Is so lonely tonight
These cries aren’t heard
Because I keep them silent
My heart is so cold
I need anyone’s warmth
I’ve been falling down
And nothing is catching me
I can’t fight this feeling off
I just want to escape this
Nothing is worse than
Feeling this loneliness

 

© 2009 QuietPoet


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This is beautifully written. It shows a lot of emotion. I can strongly relate to this. Very nice flow.

Posted 15 Years Ago


such emotion in this, well expressed tho!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Great poem, nice flow. I'm always alone, and its not fun. I loved this poem, and enjoyed it very much. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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