So Far Away

So Far Away
You entered into my life
With no fight at all
You didn’t have to climb walls
Just walked right through the door
You didn’t have to find the key
Because I unlocked it on my own
I let you fly me through the sky
You are gentle like the clouds
Every word you say I believe
Because you have such meaning
You give me reason with everything
I like the respect you give me
I find hope in you
You would make the perfect boyfriend
Sometimes I think your too good to be true
Your always saying sweet things to me
You let me in without having to fight
What I like most about you is
You like me for who I am
Without even seeing me
But what I hate most
Is you are so far away..

Reviews

[Bud]

Sounds like you have come to know someone as a blind person would...through their words. Except, of course a blind person would have the advantage of the other senses. lol This is a Fabulous piece. It expresses how you were more than willing to let them into your world, your heart that all the obstacles were removed by you so, that they wouldn't have anything to hinder their path leading them to you. But unfortunately, there is distance between the two of you. My dear Kylie, Love has no limits. It will always find a way. Never can Love be stopped by any determination. Another Masterpiece of expression! Outstanding!

[Charles]

So, go ahead and chase your dream. The poem makes it obvious that you have the passion to write. Find the muse often.