Taken Over Me

I dont know what all this was..

Taken Over Me
This all turned out to
Be a big mess in my heart
I knew deep down that’s all it was
But I wasn’t listening
Now I find myself here
Feeling like I made a huge mistake
What is wrong with me
Who is this person I have become
It all happened this week
I’ve lost who I am
All because I wanted to have fun
And it was, but I didn’t know
I would feel this way..
Feeling like I did wrong
But really I didn’t
I just made a choice
And I ran with it
But how can someone do that
How do people do this?
Without falling completely
How did he not have feelings
Why didn’t he think of me
While he had his way with me
And this is my fault too
I just wanted more than he did
While he just wanted that one thing
Now its so tempting
It was so amazing in every way
But I can’t do it again
I’m better than this
I deserve so much more
I can’t set myself up
And that’s all I’m doing
I don’t know who that person was
But I hope to God, she is gone
Time to just calm down
And have faith fill me
My entire body crashed down
But at least I learned from this..

Reviews

[Bud]

That is the important part of your experience. You took something from it that lifts you to a higher ground of enlightenment. You learned from it. You have a most Excellent ability to express exactly what you feel, in a way the reader can feel and relate to. Keep up the Outstanding works of true expressive art!

[THE LOST ROSE]

It sounds like you had an out of body experience? Sometimes through passion, pain, love and lust we learm our greatest heartfelt lessons in life. QP you came across something and your sweetly poetically communicated that with us. As always I enjoy your poetry and the insightfulness you give us. Keep living the way you know you want and should live. The poetry will forever flow.

[Sean M. Addams]

very moving piece... living and learning is a big part of life... very nice expressed here... enjoyed this one alot..nice work!!

[Tori]

Well that was very deep, I must say my friend! I enjoyed it quite a lot. A great rip between respect for yourself and wanting to have fun. But alas, we humans can never decied which is best...very very good! AND FACE! I was first to review! OH! What then politics? Face...veyr good.