My Key

My Key
I can’t fight theses feelings
Because its just real
I’m just whatever on guys
I don’t want to deal with them
I’m not going to waste my time
If they aren’t going to try
They have to show me
That they are all in
If you don’t make an effort
I’m not even going to look your way
Or even give you a chance
I’m just tired doing it
Jerk after jerk gets old, quick
I’m not going to fall in your web
Your really falling into mine
If I’m into you, I wont say a word
If I’m not, I’ll talk to you anyway
I won’t lead you on
I’ll tell you how it is
But I don’t want to hurt you
Right now, I just feel like I will
So much is going on
I can barely keep up
Its nice to have someone
Text me all day long
Say nice things to me
But when they are far
Its so much easier
Than if they are here
Because they can’t get near
Of this heart I call mine
Its locked up so tight
And only I has the key.

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

A nice theme you have created for yourself with this piece. I like quite a few lines in this piece;

I'm not going to fall in your web
Your really falling into mine
If I'm into you, I wont say a word
If I'm not, I'll talk to you anyway

This stanza sounds like you are now in total control.

Its locked up so tight
And only I has the key.

You are not going to be easily taken again. Whoever steps up is going to have to put in work to unlock your heart. Really dug this piece QP.

[17thWhitePrince]

very very nicely written and is oh so true many a times esp. in your case cause it is best if you hold the key to your own heart ... don't give it away to just any guy ... hold it tight and keep it close to you ... allow that special someone to open your heart only once he has truly allowed you to open his first =)

a wonderfully written piece indeed !!!

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece but expressed well... sometimes i learned being alone is the best... if someone comes along that sweeps you off your feet always keep your heart on a tight grip... sorry i'm just ranting.. but overall i liked this alot... nice work..

[Bud]

You have a Wonderful writing style of your own that I like a lot. It gives the reader such a one on one personal connection to what is being told by the writer. It always feels live, honest, sincere, and full of raw emotions. This one is no different. Keep on writing!

[talulu love]

I LOVE IT

PLUS I LOVE THE PFOTO U USED

GOOD JOB