Heart Fly Away

Heart Fly Away
I hate you for making me feel this way
Why did you have to come into my life
I should have just walked away when you said hi
You broke my heart
And I don’t want to fall apart
Its just all so much
When all it was, was just lust
I don’t want to do this
I have to find another fish
But the sea seems to be empty
And I don’t want them to hurt me
I want someone to be able to take this thought out of my mind
And turn it into only him and I
I don’t know if I want to try
Because how will someone make me fly
If I can’t make this pain go away..

Reviews

[there is no more from m..]

beautiful amazingly written and a grate rythmn

[vandana]

nice poem......the flow & rythmn is good and your thoughts well expressed.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very realistic read and full of hope... like the imagery in this alot.. overall nice job on this...

[mmzx]

totally something we all can relate to.
the regret we feel.
:D

good job (!!)

[Bud]

We all have experienced this. You expressed yourself honestly, and well. This speaks of a want for true love in the heart. The kind of love that is so strong it consumes our very thoughts. The kind that let's a person feel like they are loved and wanted as a person, not an object. Excellent!

[deeps]

so full of emotion here
Well expressed

[Dillon Cotter]

aww sad yet full of reality and emotion, very beautiful and gloomy.