Can�t Fall For It

Ugh. Men.

Can’t Fall For It
Stop, right there
Don’t come any closer
Why am I doing this..
Just letting you all in
So you can break my heart
I just see this not going anywhere
But what’s so wrong with talking
What’s wrong with having someone
Tell you nice things and make you feel worthy
But I’m not thinking of my heart
Its all with the mind
I’ve let all of you capture me
And swallow me whole
I want to let you all in
But your not true or faithful
You say you’ll text, but you don’t
You say you’ll call, but you won’t
Then you have me waiting for no reason
Why should I stop my life for you?
For someone who doesn’t do the same for me
But their just so fun and addicting
I will be strong though
I can’t fall for it all again..
My heart is safely locked up
And only ONE has the key.

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Hey QP I am trying to catch up with these read request before I left and this piece is the first one I decided to read. I love this. I hope I come across a few more like this. I enjoy the realness in this poem. Staright from the heart and the soul. Great great Write!!!!!!!

[Bud]

Just be sure to remember where you put the key! It'd be a shame to not be able to access your heart, once you've found a suitable place to let it breathe. Another Excellent piece!

[Michael X]

you have such an amazing way with form that the words pull the reader from sentence to sentence ,
all the while delivering abrilliantly subtle heartfelt messege, this is beautifully done and a pleasure to read,
what i liked most was the sad yet successful feeling of hope captured perfectly