Her World Is Broken..

Her World Is Broken..

A Poem by QuietPoet
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I tried my best to help her, but she is just so.. gone.. One day I will show her this..

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Her World Is Broken..
As I sat and watched her
Fall to the floor, crying
My heart fell completely
Her soul lying there
Crumbled into a ball
She kept saying she is depressed
And so alone and broken
She’s been treated like she is nothing
I listened to her, every word
Tears ran down my face
But I didn’t let her see
She drank her troubles away
It only made her sad
I held her in my arms while she wept
I wish I could have taken it all away
The pain and hurt she feels
She cries every single night
And no one hears her
Its so sad to see her this way
Its just too heartbreaking
We laid down on the floor with her
As she cried herself away
I just sat and watched her
Entire world torn apart..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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I think will let what is not said speak out for this Magnificent piece, Kylie. Some, no matter how much or bad we want to help, simply can not be reached inside. Sad.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Heart felt.
Very emotional.
Beautiful flow and rhym.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 14, 2009

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QuietPoet
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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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