I Remember You..

Its sad you see someone you know at a drug addict place, while working there..

I Remember You..
The moment you walked
Through the door
You looked so lost
Your eyes faded
Walking slow
I know who you are
We went to the same school
We both had a crush on each other
But you don’t remember me..
The drugs have taken over you
I can’t believe I remembered you
My heart sank, it skipped a beat..
Why did you pick this life?
How did you get yourself here?
You had a chance to be something great
But you’ve found yourself at a rehab
I wont judge you and I can’t think less of you
I’ll try my best to help in anyway I can
You might remember me in the end
But for now I’ll accept you just the way you are..

Reviews

[The Flawed]

I hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, but you asked me to review this so here it is,
I think this is very deep and sad, but it reads to me more like a thought than a poem, it's obviously very personal and heartfelt, but as a poem it does not work for me,
But what do I know?
(Having read many of your pieces I think you are a very talented writer, so please don't get this the wrong way).

[Haifa]

I felt bad and sad about what happened to that person, I hope he or she would quite this such thing.
Great writing, well done.
Haifa

[R J Askew]

'We went to the same school' is the line for me. But what different outcomes. Damn drugs.

[HorrorMaster]

I thought it was sad and deep.

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece.... i thought this was expressed well... overall nice job on this...

[Bud]

Wow! So very well written, Kylie! Outstanding! Life is what it is. Remember, people don't always choose to go the way they do, sometimes. Although there is always a choice, the choices aren't always so clear and obvious. I don't think anyone grows up wanting to be an addict or to lose in the game of life. But both happen to people. Once again, this writing shows the true wealth of your heart. You have offered willingness to not be judgmental towards this person, whom you had a crush on in school. Rather, you choose to let them take the course they are on with the least amount of humility and pain possible, along with the offer of helping as much as you can. Doesn't get any more humane than that! Excellent work of art, Kylie!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very deeply touching, full of caring and understanding.

[deeps]

I can really this and it's such a sad write really
you expressed your emotion well