Hold On

Hold On
Put the knife down
And just hold on
Walk away from the worries
And just hold on

 

It doesn’t have to be this way
You don’t have to run
Your feet and heart can’t anymore
You don’t have to look back
The path your on isn’t the way

 

Let the scars heal
And just hold on
Find happiness
And just hold on

 

Life is beautiful
Whatever made you want this
Leave it all behind
And live different days
It never had to come to this

 

Don’t let go just yet
And hold on
Don’t cut the rope
Just hold on

 

Every day is new
With greatness,
Filled with love
And happiness is spread
You’ll see and find it

 

So put the knife down
And just hold on
Walk away from the worries
And just hold on..

Reviews

[Flo_writer]

Something of Faith and Hope. A genuine poem that preaches there is a brighter day. The mood and the message is clear here. Cheers and hold on.

[Bud]

Sometimes all a person needs is a little chalk to hold on. Like a rock climber using the chalk to keep their hands dry from sweat, so that they may have a better grip. A person may be nervous and scared not knowing which way to turn, what to do or how to go about it...leaving their palms sweaty and losing grip. Just a little chalk is all that is needed to help them hold on until they get a better grip on life. Excellent, as always, Kylie! You have the heart of an angel...worth more than any precious metal!

[Orlando Murcia]

I am still holding on
Who ever this was for
I hope they read it

I can tell you relly care for this person

Great work!

Orlando

[Eagle Cruagh]

Great poem !

Books have been written about this phenomon,
pleading for us to not give up, "hold on ".

It is always darkest before the dawn, "hold on".
When all is forsaken, life blooms anew, "hold on".

Hold on, an amazing concept, it has saved countless
lives, marriages and on and on , "hold on ".

A very talented writer has created another great poem.
She creates and creates another beautiful piece.

"H old On" I`ll bring the drinks and the picnic lunch
and we will just hold on to this sunny day.
I love your poem, the writing , the style and the concept.

Bright and beautiful !

My rating ---- 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Sean M. Addams]

i really like this piece and thought the lines and just hold on ... added in every other stanza was very creative... nice touch!!! overall i thought you did an excellent job describing ones emotions in this... nice work!!!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow a poem that cries out for help and guidenance. It sounds like you are reaching out to soothe and comfort someone souls. With the way you let it out i know it work. This poe work but from you what else is new. You call yourself Quiet but your poems screams!