Baby, Don�t Leave Me..

Baby, Don’t Leave Me..
Out of no where
Tears form my eyes
Because I think about
The moment I left you
We were at the gas station
Filling up to head home
You going right, I’m going left
When all I wanted was for you to follow me
I kissed you goodbye
I thought about turning back
And saying “Baby, don’t leave me”..
But I know my eyes would have
Filled with water and dripped to the ground
I would have made you crumble inside
And we would have never left each other
Is it wrong of me to wanted a quick goodbye
So the pain wouldn’t be so hard?
But its killing me inside now
Because I wanted a few more minutes in your arms
One last long, beautiful kiss
For you to whisper in my ear
And tell me “I love you, baby”..
I will never forget when you watched me sleep
How you wrapped your arms so tightly around me
I felt so safe and warm that night
The way we made love
Was surrounded with affection
I felt love inside of me
I wish I would have turned back
And said your name with tears in my eyes
“Baby, Don’t Leave Me”..

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

I love how this poem tells and comes to life as a visual from a movie. I truly enjoy this poem of yours. This is one of the pieces that add that visual touch. I enjoy your work and the flow of emotions you put into each and every word. I never feel like you waste a word. Every word has its purpose in your poetry. A skill I wish I had.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was beautifully sad :(
It touched the very core of me...
Personal writings like this are so precious for anyone to judge.
Great work!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Awwwww ! That brought tears to these cold eyes.
Young love is often so cruel. It seems so hard for
the two to agree. To agree and just say I Love You.
That was all that was needed.

Again , this conversational style, like talking to a friend.
Is most pleasant and direct.

My rating ---- 100 %

=------ Eagle Cruagh

[lindsay]

This actually made me really emotional myself. Thank you for the request!

[The Flawed]

Good job, very emotional,
But I think the line "Is it wrong of me to wanted a quick goodbye" should read "Was it wrong of me to have wanted a quick goodbye"
But what do I know?
Well done

[Flo_writer]

And I wonder why she didn't turn back to say so?
I guess happy endings are for the movies.
It's very passionate, almost soul bearing. And I say "almost" because she didn't turn around and confess her feelings for him. You did a good job painting a picture here, as I even went ahead and imagine the gas station was a Citgo or something. A good read it is.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very deep emotional piece at least it was to me but that is where my heart is right now either way nice job...

[Living with Faith]

I can see this playing out in my mind and I feel like I want to cry. I think this poem is amazing keep on writing, I cant wait to read some more.

[deeps]

Ah this is just so wonderful and sweet. This is just so amazing.
Please send me more writes more often. Enjoyed reading this,
It is very sincere.

[Bud]

This is a very sweet write...with just a pinch of bitterness that only missing the one you love can provide. Very well written. Excellent! Keep up the Great works of art, Kylie. You'll be back in his arms, before you know it. : >)