I�m In Pieces

I’m In Pieces
I always find myself here
So lost and confused
All I keep feeling is
So alone and forgotten
My heart is in pieces
And I don’t know how
To get them back together
I don’t need anyone
To help glue them back
Because I’ve tried that
This is my personal situation
Don’t ask me what’s wrong,
I can’t figure that out for myself
Only I can make myself whole
Why is it so hard for me to do?
Because nothing works anymore
Tape becomes lose
Glue is messy
Nails just hurt
And  band aids don’t stick
So I’ll just keep the pieces
Scattered in my body
Because that’s where they belong..
 

Reviews

[Benjamin L. Weekly]

I am a big fan of dark sorrowful poetry. In this I seem some similarities to dark poems I have written. Without knowing whether you are open to constructive criticism, I will only say that the fundamentals are very good, and with a little tightening around the edges this would be quite a short, knockout poem. If you want in depth criticism, feel free to message me.

The idea of being alone with your pieces because none of the solutions you try work is one I sympathize with. Good job conveying the emotions.

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

I have both pondered and experienced the broken emotions you share.......at the tender age of 50 moons.....I selfishly dream of a lady to complete my trip........to compliment my prose.....to inspire deepest feelings of peace and satisfaction.......Kylie.........I truly believe it's never been under my control......the muse I seek is God given....angelic........predestined.........she shall arrive if I am meant to meet her..........and if she does not.....then it was never meant to be anyway........Life is fragile and soulful........it's all about soul for me today.....I love your style and your sincerity.....your raw honesty.......May you always write in smiles and sleep in complete peace my new friend......

Much love always,
:-)

[Sean M. Addams]

i like this alot you put alot of emotion into your work and i respect that and it makes for some strong amazing pieces... keep up the great writes!!

[lauren emily]

Heartbreaking. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this. :(
Great write, I really enjoyed it :)

~Lauren

[Listener]

.. Man this is the perfect poem to describe the many hardships i've been through. Your emotions in this piece of art is marvelous. I related to it well... KUDOS! 8D

[ape domenigoni]

this is very heartbreaking and I can feel your pain and confusement loud and clear. Great poem!

[sheerpoetry]

i can relate sometimes it seems like the only thing to come together is a good write like this one here.

[lindsay]

I connect with the emotions of this poem on many levels. You do a great job at conveying your feelings and express so that your readers can connect and sympathize with you! Good Job!

[Edalene Connell]

This is a sad and heartfelt poem. Lots of people get their hearts broken and first they look for help. But then they realize only they can only heal themselves. It takes time to figure it out, but once you do I think you heal fast, thats just my thought though.

[Orlando Murcia]

Very sad, a feeling of hopelessness
is portrayed here feeling that there is
nothing that could be done to put the pieces
back together

Very well expressed

Muaaah! There all the pieces are back
and good as new :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats so sad Kylie, hope you already feel better , Yossi