Just look, And You�ll See

Just look, And You�ll See

A Poem by QuietPoet

Just look, And You’ll See

All I need is one kiss
To make the pain go away
All I want is for you
To understand me

Look deep inside me
And say what you see
What is it you feel
When you look in my heart

Do you see darkness
Or beating red
Do you feel bad
Or goodness in me

Why do you need
All the answers
Can’t my love
Ever be enough?

I put everything I have
In this relationship
I try so hard
To keep us together

If it wasn’t worth it to me
I would have been gone
The day you said
“I love you”

I pour my heart out to you
Every single day
I flood you with my love
Every chance I get

I just don’t know
Why you continue
To ask why I’m still with you
When the answer is right in front of you..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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I really like how you ended it, because I have that question asked to me too and I don't know how to respond to it, except with a smile haha. I thought this poem was really sweet and passionate =]

Posted 15 Years Ago


This piece of work is comforting in a way, it says that there is still real love out there. Thanks for sharing this piece, I really liked it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Some people just never understand, always needing reassurance... usually the ones who have burned really bad before... a very tender and compassionate plea with your heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I just don't know
Why you continue
To ask why I'm still with you
When the answer is right in front of you..

Wow that was a powerful ending. You must be an amzing person with an equally big heart. Some people don't believe and understand that there are great people out in the world and they can be loved by them. That is why he can't see the answers all the time. Keep pointing it out to him. Very Very good poem QP. I enjoy reading your work as always.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 18, 2009

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